27 October | Review 6
Mr Ravindra said,
- The end needs more closure, ending with the TV might get confusing, try something else, the older ending with the eye worked better (Have changed it back to an eye, but a different one)
-The break-away section is very different but still somehow fits in, so that’s fine.
They said: It works
I think the sound needs more work, and would like to work on it some more post submission.
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