-Establish the eye-hole as the viewer, add his somewhere in between as well so we remember he exists, otherwise he makes appearance only in the beginning and end. Also, show him as a person not just an eye.
-Tv could be used as an interface?...
-In any still scene make sure there is some movement somewhere/ don't have it completely still at any point
-People might not get that you are talking of aliens as a metaphor, make it very clear at some point, because that changes the meaning of your animation completely. (govt. hosp is where most people got that it was more that aliens from outer space)
-Some scenes (bus) needs to be worked on// some places need more details
-Keep fluidity of motion consistent/ add in-betweens/ some transitions need work
- End needs more 'dum'; It needs something to tie everything together. End with a bang/ come back in a circle.
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